Katie+Schneider

Mrs. G can you look over what I have so far in my discussion and conclusion and see if what I can improve?

also i have pictures of all of the petri dishes. which ones do you think i should put in my paper?



I looked at it and made a few edits -

I finished everything for my paper! Can you just look over it again and see if I'm missing anything or if anything needs to be fixed? Also, I wasn't sure what else i needed to put for the introduction at the beginning of the research.



2/11/12: I started to edit my paper. Can you just look over my materials, photos, and graph sections for now?



2/12/12 - Hi Katie - I looked over most of your paper (I really didn't look at the background too much - I'll just assume that you made the changes I suggested). I made a number of changes and suggestions in the abstract, materials section, discussion, and one or two in the conclusion. I remembered to track most of them, but forgot to track a few (especially in the materials section - you'll see them - they are in black rather than in red). I moved the picture narratives a bit - they were running off the page. I'm attaching a paper with changes.

2/14/12: I converted my procedure and discussion into numbered/bulleted form, but I didn't really take anything out. Can you just look and see if what I have is good or if there is unnecessary information?



2/26/12: PJAS POWERPOINT



2/27 - I looked over your power point - I would like to see you shorten and bullet those research slides - they are way too wordy. I have some other suggestions in the note section. I'm attaching: